Improvement?

[sandra]

Hi

I've been playing indoors whilst it's been raining - playing with the techniques in editing and with RAW files.

Here's some of the results ......... constructive critisism appreciated! (tell me if they're worse too!)

[Baz]

Hi Sandra

My only real 'criticism' is the 'copyright' banners! Which are too big and distractive. Maybe smaller, out of the subject way? Or a 'watermark' that doesn't detract from seeing what the pictures are intended?

And just a maybe a slight too much 'vignetting' on the second shot, of the tiger, but otherwise they are all fine.

How did you get all those animals 'indoors' then? :-)

[sandra]

Hiya Baz

You know, I appreciate your constructive comments ....... and yes, looking at them again, that copyright is FAR TOO BIG! I shall have an evening of "play" again this week ..... and see how we can improve these even further.... Oh, and I'll "unvinegar" the Tiger a bit as well .... isn't he lovely

I hope I can remember how I did it (age and all that you know ;D )

D'ya know, you can coax anything inside with an offer of a good meal ......

Thanks again Baz .... I think I might just be on the right track now...

[sandra]

Hi all

Here's some more "improved" shots ...

[laurawilliams2008]

Awsome shots!

[sandra]

Thanks Laura ... much appreciated.
I feel I have a way to go yet ....... so watch this space